Kia ora My name is Avalon and l am from Panmure bridge school. l think you have made a great sidle to show how you made this Purerehua. l think you could have added more information on what a Purerehua is and why they make Purerehua. l like also how you added a video to show how to Drill a hole in it. Your Purerehua came out great l like how you added a design in and you should have added in how you put the design on. Where did they come from,Who was the first person to make Purerehua. You should have wrote a burbl so l could understand more about Purerehua and how you felt about making yours and how it came out the end. Keep it up
Kia ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Avalon and l am from Panmure bridge school. l think you have made a great sidle to show how you made this Purerehua. l think you could have added more information on what a Purerehua is and why they make Purerehua. l like also how you added a video to show how to Drill a hole in it. Your Purerehua came out great l like how you added a design in and you should have added in how you put the design on. Where did they come from,Who was the first person to make Purerehua. You should have wrote a burbl so l could understand more about Purerehua and how you felt about making yours and how it came out the end.
Keep it up